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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada KaidiV - English

    • Pleas correct. Story continued.

    • I thought to myself, why I keeping to saw her.
    • Funny its like a fate that we meet again and what is meaning of that, but the main course was so good, really tasty that I forgot Haila and my eyes was fixed with desert which was ice cream with cherries.
    • So I lift it little nearer by me and it was gone I mean ice cream - so very good.
    • When I get off the canteen one oldest man come to me and ask politely to enjoy with his group, becouse they needed a little help.
    • Of course I was agree.
    • Anyway I haven´t plan for my day and I took everything new with high excitement.
    • To be continued.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • Funny its like a fate that we meet again and what is meaning of that, but the main course was so good, really tasty that I forgot Haila and my eyes was fixed with desert which was ice cream with cherries.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Funny its like aIts a funny fate that we meet again and what is the meaning of that, b?. But the main course was so good, really tasty that I forgot Haila and my eyes wasere fixed wion the desert which was ice cream with cherries.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • Funny its like aIt's a funny fate that we meet again and what is. What was the meaning of that, b? But the main course was so good, really tasty ; so good that I forgot Haila and my eyes wasere fixed wion the desert which was ice cream with cherries.
      callmeacallmea profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • FunnyIs it a coincidence or its like ait fate that we meet again, and what is meaning of that, but tam I to make of it as the waiter placed our dinners on the table.¶The main course was so good, really tastydelicious, that I had forgot Haila and my eyes was fixed witen about Haila. And now my eyes were drawn to the desert which was ice cream with cherries.that now occupied the table. Ice cream with cherries! So I lift my bowl of ice cream under my nose and it was gone in minutes-- so very good!
      8Avalon828Avalon82 profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • When I get off the canteen one oldest man come to me and ask politely to enjoy with his group, becouse they needed a little help.
      Undi sekarang!
    • When I get offwent from the canteen one oldest man coame to me and asked politely to enjoy with his group, becoause they needed a little help.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • When I get off the canteen onean oldest man coame to meup and asked me politely to enjoy withjoin him and his his group, becoause they needed a little help. Of course I agreed.
      8Avalon828Avalon82 profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7