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Text from Leandroharaoka - English

  • My outflow

    • Hello, I'm from Brazil and, actually, I'm studying electrical engineering.
    • Before I start my faculty, I was a very outgoing person.
    • Every week, my friends and I leave our homes in order to have fun with new experiences.
    • We usually went to differents kinds of parties, such as Rock Shows, Raves, Country Shows and much more.
  • It was a great time.
    • I guess everyone had this passage in its life.
    • Nevertheless, when I began my studies, in my university, everything changed.
  • Now, I'm always busy with extremely dificult exams, hard classes, lack of time.
  • I feel really sad and bored.
  • I can't stand my course anymore, it's really hard and my social life tends to disappear.
    • Although all this feelings I told you, my course is getting to its end.
  • This text is just an outflow that I decided to share with you while training my writing skills.
  • Hope you liked it!
  • If you found any mistake, please, correct me, it helps a lot.
  • I hope I can help you too. Thanks!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English