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- Hi everyone.
- I'm looking forward to talk with the native speakers of English who currently preoccupied with studying Russian, for language exchange..
- Great thanks and see you soon, I hope.

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- Hi everyone.Dear Friend,¶ ¶I know this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship for both of us because A 'hi' today can mean a friendship tomorrow. Friendship is a word, the very sight of which in print makes the heart warm. A stranger is just a friend you haven't met yet; we got to take time to be friendly because it's the road to happiness; I want us to be friends, I’m Serena king, female, single and I’m from USA.I will give you more details about me and the kind of a friend I desires to have but if you are not a serious person don’t bother to reply me back; I’m looking forward for a better and lasting relationship, for better reply in my email: serena.king@usa.com¶Best regards, ¶Serena.
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- I'm looking forward to talking with ~~the~~ native speakers of English who are currently ~~preoccupied with~~ studying Russian, for language exchange..
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- I'm looking forward to talk with ~~the~~English native speakers ~~of English who~~who are currently preoccupied with studying Russian, for language exchange..
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