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- Please, correct my letter!
- I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
- My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.

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- Please, correct my letter!
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- ~~Please, correct my letter!~~My name is Miss Amina.Please i will like you to contact me through my email address(aminajafar22@hotmail.com) so that i will send my picture to you and tell you all about me,Thanks,¶From Amina¶
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
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- I w~~ant to go this summer in some~~ould like to go visit a country of Western Europe in the summer.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.
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- My friends says that it would be better if i visited ~~first~~ England or Germany first but i ~~thinks~~would rather go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate stud~~y in~~ ies there.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2