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    • a strange story

  • (Three people speak ) _Look!
    • It's rainning cats and dogs!
  • _you remember ? _oh God! _no!
    • _it was the day of owr first meeting _yes we have been good friends since this day _actually how did you get there ? _where ?
  • _in that abandoned house _that's a long story _come on ! Tell us !
    • _okey,it was in fall _yes we know ,we were there _yeah like you were a poet ? _ok ok fine!
  • So I came back by mom.
  • I decided to take a way through the forest.
  • Suddenly my old car stopped.
  • I tried to call someone but there wasn't any network.
    • So I got out to get some help when it was pouring .I saw a trouble small light .I started to run and I arrived in front of a house that looked like abandonned but anyway I knocked at the door .No one opened.
  • I turned back to leave this place .It was scaring me .At this moment I heard the door screeching and a sweet voice tell me "come inside young girl ".
    • I turned agai :nobady was there .I went inside.
  • And you Lily .How did you get there ?
    • _well my story is crazier than Mandy .I was into the forest _why ? _wait wait !
  • I'm gone to tell you the story.
  • I had to camp with my friends in that forest.
    • I went to pick some muchroomes but I got lost .Suddenly I met a really big and terrifing beer .I took no time to think : I ran .All of a sudden I fell in a lake and I saw a big crocodile .
  • _stop lying _ok ok ...and I saw a little frog .I swam so fast to make my way of the water.
  • I was completely lost !
  • I continued to walk.
  • I shouted :"hey ho !someone here ?" But only the silence answered me .The sky was cloudy. few minutes later there was a shower.
  • I saw a little light too .I ran and I arrived in front of a very old house .I knocked and the door opened alone .And you Sandy ?
  • _me I was inside.
  • _yeees...but how did you arrive there ?
  • _a few weeks ago ,I have received a letter .The letter came by a notary .I was the only heir of my aunt .I have receive tweenty thousand Euro and a house. That house.
  • I lived in the USA.
  • I've taken a plaine and then a taxi to come here.
  • When finally I arrived in the house.
  • In first I didn't want to go inside but a mysterious something attired me.
  • I opened the door and I saw the tatty cell ,the cracking ground.
  • On the ground floor was a big kitchen and a spacious living room with a old and flowers-like motifs curtains and armchairs .I didn't stop sneeze.
  • I would continue the visit ,I took the stairs for up to the attic when I heard footsteps:it was you Mandy.
  • _yes I'm remember.
  • I was great to see the look on your face.
  • _Yes I'm scared!
  • I wound down to welcome you.
  • _when I arrived you were drinking coffee like today _yes Sandy it has the same delicious than that's moment.
  • _but ...it's not me who's done it.
  • It's you Mandy. _me?
  • No it's you _no it's you _ok ok girls it's only one more weird thing happened in there. ....
  • _and what are the other weird things ?
  • _the door opened alone,the sweet voice up above Mandy calling ,a old dress you worn it and your strange behavior ,the stran..
  • _sorry sorry but which dress ?I've never do that ! _yes you did !
  • Before you became of the attic with your family's photo album.
  • _it's not true !
  • _ you must have overlooked _that's at the moment we could see how much you looked like your aunt _girls think you my aunt...
  • _nooo ...I don't want to hear that .It's not possible .
  • _ok ok but if that the ghost of my aunt ,she was very kind .
  • _I told you stop!
  • I don't want to hear you say that again.
  • _nevertheless she done a delicious coffee . _Lola !
  • _haha by the way !the works is progressing ?
  • _yes very good indeed.
  • _Sandy I don't understand you.
  • Why want you keep that horrible house?
  • _because there is ,of this house,a welcoming atmosphere and I love that.
  • _don't tell mee you want live there _yes!why not !
  • _I will never go back to that house ...
  • _you are a slight exaggeration ,no ?
  • _let me finish ...I will never go back to that house unless you do the same coffee.
  • _maybe you could ask her aunt for the recipe ... _Mandy !

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