Korreksies

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Text from Lulianna - English

    • Describe a Drawing

    • This picture is a drawing of Uncle Sam which is a common national personnification of the United sates.
    • This is why he is wearing the american colors (blue, white and red) along with the stars and the red and white strips which remains of the american flag.
    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it, 3 people are brushing and washing his hair and his beard, 2 people are polishing his shoes, 2 other are painting his clothing and an other one is ironing his throusers.
    • All those 12 people represent immigrants who came to the USA in order to live the american dream, which includes having a good job and a pleasant life but this drawing shows that they held unskilled jobs and are considered as menial no matter how hard they work

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • This is why he is wearing the american colors (blue, white and red) along with the stars and the red and white strips which remains of the american flag.
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    • This is why he is wearing the aAmerican colors (of blue, white and red), along with the stars and the red and white stripes which remains ofthat make up the aAmerican flag.
      BigBrother99BigBrother99 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • This is why he is wearing the americanpatriotic colors (blueof red, white, and red)blue along with the stars and the red and white stripes whichthat remainds us of the american flag.
      8Avalon828Avalon82 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2
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    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it, 3 people are brushing and washing his hair and his beard, 2 people are polishing his shoes, 2 other are painting his clothing and an other one is ironing his throusers.
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    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it, 3 people are brushing and washing his hair and his beard, 2 people are polishing his shoes, 2 other are painting his clothing and an other one is ironing his throusers.
      BigBrother99BigBrother99 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it,; 3 people are bruwashing and washcombing his hair and his beard,; 2 people are polishing his shoes,; 2 others are painting his clothing; and an other one is ironing his throusers.
      8Avalon828Avalon82 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him :. A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweepbrushing it, 3. Three people are brushcombing and washing his hair and his beard, 2. Two people are polishing his shoes, 2 and two others are painting his clothing andwhile an other one is ironing his throusers.
      NicdeutschNicdeutsch profile picture Opmerkings 1
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
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    • All those 12 people represent immigrants who came to the USA in order to live the american dream, which includes having a good job and a pleasant life but this drawing shows that they held unskilled jobs and are considered as menial no matter how hard they work
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    • AllEach of thoese 12 people represents an immigrants who came to the USAamerica in order to live the american dream, which includes having a good job and a pleasaliving a decent life b. But this drawing shows that they heold unskilled jobs and are considered as menial laborers no matter how hard they work.
      8Avalon828Avalon82 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4