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    • I live in France

  • I was born in Melun, Seine-et-Marne.
    • It's not really far away from Paris, I had just to take the subway to go to the capital.
    • During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffer for me...
    • After, we (my mom and me) were go to two or three others cities in the same region.
    • When my mom met my stepfather, she ask me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
    • As I hate my father since my childhood, i decided to follow her without any hesitation !
    • Now, I am 20 and I live near to Toulon since four years now.

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    • During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffer for me...
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    • During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffering for me...
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    • During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another Ffrench city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffering for me...
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    • DuringFor eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym ofous with wounds and suffering for me...
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    • During the eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another Ffrench city, buI felt this place is ato be synonym ofous with wounds and suffering for me...
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    • When my mom met my stepfather, she ask me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
      투표하세요!
    • When my mom met my stepfather, she asked me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
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      투표하세요!
    • When my mom met my stepfather, she asked me if I wantedould like to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, inFrance, 800 km far from Paris) or if I prefered to stay with my father...
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    • When my mom met my stepfather, she asked me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from, which is in France and 800 km south of Paris), or to stay with my father...
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    • When my mom first met my stepfather, she ask me if I wanted to followgo with her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
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