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Teks daripada mllx_cha - English

    • Idea of progress

  • For this notion, we will focus on the progress of energy, and notably of renewable energy.
    • We may ask ourselves why renewable energy exists nowadays and what are their assets and drawbacks.
    • In my speech, I’m going to talk first of all about the reasons why renewable energy exists and we will focus secondly on advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy.
  • I ) Let’s start the first part.
    • In fact, fossils fuels and nuclear power which used coal, oil and gas for the first one and uranium for the second are qualified by “non renewable energy”.
    • Indeed they use, as their name, non renewable energy and they contribute to increasing pollution because of the reject of waste as Carbone dioxide which is a greenhouse gas and increase greenhouse effect and yet, global warming.
    • We studied a picture which represent a city with a dark atmosphere and a lot of activity.
    • It shows the fact men can harness nature and take advantages of it but at the same time, the fact that men produce thanks to these activities a lot of pollution.
    • We also studied a reportage which deals with fossil fuels and pollution, they expose the fact that it’s important to change our own energy for product electricity because in future, if greenhouse effect grow up, our atmosphere will change, and perhaps, it can have consequences for life.
  • In this way, renewable energy are invented as a solution for producing electricity with environmental concerns.
  • II ) Let’s start the second part.
  • Indeed, renewable energy doesn’t produce wastes because they use energy of environment as the sun and the wind.
  • There are a lot of renewable energy as solar power, wind power, tidal power, hydro-electric power, biomass or biogas.
  • I have studied notably energy created by wind turbines offshore for a presentation.
    • In fact wind blows the propeller round, which turn a generator to produce electricity, which is import in a big rope from the wind turbines to the coast.
    • Moreover, all renewable energy have advantage and disadvantage, for example, wind power use the wind which is free but the propeller can kill birds !
  • For a hydro-electric power, electricity can be generated constantly but it’s very expensive to build it.
    • I want to insist on the fact that a renewable energy is an idea of progress for our society because they contribute to reducing the production of greenhouse effect when we use them than non renewable energy.
    • To conclude, renewable energy exists for limited the greenhouse effect and allows us to preserve our atmosphere for the future, in this way, they are an idea of progress.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • In my speech, I’m going to talk first of all about the reasons why renewable energy exists and we will focus secondly on advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In my speech, I’m going to talk first of all about the reasons why renewable energy exists and then we will focus secondly on advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy.
    • In my speech, I’m going to talk first of all about all the reasons why renewable energy exists and secondly, we will focus secondly onon the advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
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  • Ayat 5
    • In fact, fossils fuels and nuclear power which used coal, oil and gas for the first one and uranium for the second are qualified by “non renewable energy”.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In fact, fFossils fuels and nuclear power which used coal, oil and gas for the first one and uranium for the secondand uranium are qualified byas “non renewable energy”.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • Indeed they use, as their name, non renewable energy and they contribute to increasing pollution because of the reject of waste as Carbone dioxide which is a greenhouse gas and increase greenhouse effect and yet, global warming.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Indeed they use, aAs their name implies, non renewable energy and they contribute to increasing pollution because of the reject of waste as Carbone dioxide which is a greenhouse gas and i. Increase of the greenhouse effect and yet,gas results in global warming.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • It shows the fact men can harness nature and take advantages of it but at the same time, the fact that men produce thanks to these activities a lot of pollution.
      Undi sekarang!
    • It shows the fact men can harness nature and take advantages of it but at the same time, the fact that men produce thanks to these activities a lot ofit's also given fact that men can cause pollution as well.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • We also studied a reportage which deals with fossil fuels and pollution, they expose the fact that it’s important to change our own energy for product electricity because in future, if greenhouse effect grow up, our atmosphere will change, and perhaps, it can have consequences for life.
      Undi sekarang!
    • We also studied a reportage which deals with fossil fuels and pollution, t. They expose the fact that it’s important to change our own energy for producting electricity b. Because in future, if greenhouse effect grow up,gases increase our atmosphere will change, and perhaps,. And it can have dire consequences foin our lifeves.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
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  • Ayat 15
    • In fact wind blows the propeller round, which turn a generator to produce electricity, which is import in a big rope from the wind turbines to the coast.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In fact wind blows the propeller around, which turns a generator to produce electricity, which is imported in a big rope from the wind turbines to the coast.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 15TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 15
  • Ayat 16
    • Moreover, all renewable energy have advantage and disadvantage, for example, wind power use the wind which is free but the propeller can kill birds !
      Undi sekarang!
    • Moreover, all renewable energyies have advantages and disadvantages, for example, wind power uses the wind which is free but the propeller can kill birds !.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 16TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 16
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  • Ayat 18
    • I want to insist on the fact that a renewable energy is an idea of progress for our society because they contribute to reducing the production of greenhouse effect when we use them than non renewable energy.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I want to insist on the fact that a renewable energy is an idea of progress for our society because they contribute to reducing the production ofproduce lesser green house effectgases when we use them than non renewable energy.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 18TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 18
  • Ayat 19
    • To conclude, renewable energy exists for limited the greenhouse effect and allows us to preserve our atmosphere for the future, in this way, they are an idea of progress.
      Undi sekarang!
    • To conclude, renewable energy exists for limiteding the greenhouse effectgases and allows us to preserve our atmosphere for the future, i. In this way, they are an idea of progress. ¶
    • To conclude, renewable energy exists forto limited the greenhouse gas effect and allows us to preserve our atmosphere for the future, i. In this way, they areit is an idea of progress. ¶
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 19TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 19