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Emerald man (1)
The emerald man was born in 1995 in the USA.
He measures 1m90 and weighs 200 kilos because he has got an heavy armor of emerald.
He cannot remove his armor because is hung onon the skin.
He has only a logo on his breast.
He is very broad-shouldered and always speaks with a gruff-voiced.
He don't have girlfriend because he think he is too ugly and does not dare the approached.
Therefore he lives alone in his house in the Tibet.

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- Emerald man (1)
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câu 1
- The emerald man was born in 1995 in the USA.
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câu 2
- He measures 1m90 and weighs 200 kilos because he has got an heavy armor of emerald.
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câu 3
- He cannot remove his armor because is hung onon the skin.
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câu 4
- He has only a logo on his breast.
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câu 5
- He is very broad-shouldered and always speaks with a gruff-voiced.
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câu 6
- He don't have girlfriend because he think he is too ugly and does not dare the approached.
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câu 7
- Therefore he lives alone in his house in the Tibet.
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