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  • How should we invest moeny in education

  • Introduction The aim of this proposal is to put forward some suggestions about how the money that was recently given to our university should be applied.
  • It is, indeed, a big deal of money and therefore it should be wisely managed.
  • Let me discuss some profitable ideas in more detail.
  • Students with eBooks Given the large amount of text books our teachers ask us to consult in order to progress in our academic acquirement, it is impossible to borrow all the materials needed from the library.
  • Hence, I strongly believe that a portion of the donated sum could be used to provide each student with an eBook.
  • Furthermore, the eBook screen is harmless to the eye.
  • As a result, everyone will have access unlimitedly to virtual catalogues—whose legal access should be paid as well by de donation.
  • This way, the library won’t be saturated and students will lighten their backs.
  • A new bicycle track One may rapidly realize that our university is located in the middle of a polluted city.
  • Moreover, ours is a large institution with several buildings and the only way to get from one to another in a reasonable time is by asphalt roads.
  • Thus, the creation of a bicycle track will be a suitable solution to make our university and city more eco-friendly.
  • Conclusion If the measures aforementioned were carried out by using the money donated, not only the students would just have the chance to study in a greener campus, but they would also have a more efficient access to didactic materials.

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    • Introduction The aim of this proposal is to put forward some suggestions about how the money that was recently given to our university should be applied.
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    • Students with eBooks Given the large amount of text books our teachers ask us to consult in order to progress in our academic acquirement, it is impossible to borrow all the materials needed from the library.
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    • Hence, I strongly believe that a portion of the donated sum could be used to provide each student with an eBook.
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    • As a result, everyone will have access unlimitedly to virtual catalogues—whose legal access should be paid as well by de donation.
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    • Moreover, ours is a large institution with several buildings and the only way to get from one to another in a reasonable time is by asphalt roads.
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    • Thus, the creation of a bicycle track will be a suitable solution to make our university and city more eco-friendly.
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    • Conclusion If the measures aforementioned were carried out by using the money donated, not only the students would just have the chance to study in a greener campus, but they would also have a more efficient access to didactic materials.
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