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  • Somebody help me correct my essay please

    • Be grateful everything you have, even if empty-handed (you had nothing), be grateful because we're still alive!
    • Believe in yourseft, then nobody can make you stop.
  • Set a goal and try to achieve it by righteous path we have chosen.
  • Anyway, we still have a whole long road ahead Many years ago, in Los Angeles, the land of violence, prostitution, robberies,drugs. there was a little boy, his name is Mike Powell.
  • Just a child but he faced to those terrible things to grown up 7 persons (his brothers and sisters) during 8 years.
  • When Mike was born, his father was in prison, everything still wasn't better when his father came out prison 4 years later, his childhood attached with his father's angers and violences, When Mike was 8 years old, his father was die.
  • At this time, Mike lived with his mother, Cheryl and 3 kids.
  • Short time later, Mike's mother got remarried with a drug addict and then she was being drag in to addiction.
  • The shortage children's life become the hell.
  • Mike must did everything, like a father and replace his mother.
  • Those years, Cheryl has 3 kids again.
  • That mean Mike must work hard more.
  • But he still refuse all of templations, thefts. because he knew that, his younger brothers and sisters were seeing what he do.
  • He doesn't become a bad mirror.
  • Years later, Mike's mother was die.
  • The life was more and more difficult, more and more shortage and 1 time, when Mike's kids was sleeping, Mike want to finish all, give up his life, avoid hopeless.
  • He was killing himseft. at that time, there is a woman passed and scream louder.
  • Mike paniced and he was very scare.
  • He promised, he would never do it any more.
  • Just a few day later, Mike met a millionair who hold a ''charity kitchen''.
  • Luckily, everything become better when he took his family to join in charity team.
  • He worked hard and spent time for learning. after that, he can took care of his family and realize his dream.
  • Nowaday, no more people can avoid templations, They willing to give up their conscience to change everything, money, position, benefit, other things may be.They make bad effect to family, sociaty even themseft.
  • Life always has troubles and sometimes you think you can't get over.
  • Some people choose stand up, be strong and move up, some people are not.
    • But try to follow the righteous road, don't lose yourseft easily.

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