Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from leBonheur - English

  • A frozen bird

  • Today I watched a film.
  • It was my first film in English but with subtitles.
  • It's a story told by a girl whose mother disappeared one day.
    • A name of this girl is Kat, it sounds like a cat, she was 17 years old.
  • One evening she came back home and found her father sitting alone.
    • He said that her mother didn't returned yet in spite of the fact that it was rather late.
    • Kat's mother never loved a husband, they always slept separately and she was always unsatisfied about her life.
    • She wanted to get back her youth and change all.
  • Kat was going out with a boy.
  • It was her first love but she missed him a lot cause he didn't find enough time for her.
  • One day she came back from school and found her mom and boyfriend together on the kitchen, they cooked and laughed a lot and she suspected that they are lovers.
  • After her mother's disappearance she applied to a police officer for searching her.
  • After all she had sex with him sometimes.
  • One night he told her that he supposes her father killed the mother.
  • She percieved it like a load of rubbish.
  • Kat came over to her boyfriend to find out about their relationships and her mom but he told her nothing and said that her dad knows something.
  • Dad reassured her that he didn't killed her mother but one day he was drunk in a bar and recognized about a murder.
  • He kept her body in a fridge and killed her cause when suddenly she came back home, she discovered the husband naked in a bed with Kat's boyfriend.
  • She was angry but she laughed so loudly and sarcasticly that the husband became mad and smothered her.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English