Pataisymai

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    • About the history of the Unites Estates I have a general knowledge of what have happened and what is going on nowadays.
    • I know that it is a nation made by immigrants, the Indian genocide, the two centuries of slavery that ended up in a civil war, also that it is a very warlike country which have taken part in many different wars around the world.
    • I know the importance of this military industry, but I do not know so much about important wars like the Vietnam War, the World War I and II, and the interventions in the Arabs countries.
    • About the culture of the US, I know that in very little time they have developed a strong Ego and patriotism, based in ideas of democracy and freedom which it does not correspond with reality, making the US a really hypocrite country.
  • I know about the stereotypes of each state and their people.
    • I am also awareness of social problems and how people deal with them, how the educational system works, typical traditions, famous people (most of them from Hollywood and the TV industry), music and even some American folktales.
  • There are too many things that I don’t know about the US yet, so I am excited to discover them.
    • I would like to know more about the wars where the US have intervened, about economy (What the FED is and how it works, and also about the American economic debt), how politics works in the US (democrats and republicans, and liberals and conservatives), and I am also interested in the founding fathers and all the presidents in general.

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    • I know that it is a nation made by immigrants, the Indian genocide, the two centuries of slavery that ended up in a civil war, also that it is a very warlike country which have taken part in many different wars around the world.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • I know that it is a nation made by immigrants, the Indian genocide, the two centuries of slavery that ended up in a civil war, and also that it is a very warlike country which haves taken part in many different wars around the world.
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    • I know the importance of this military industry, but I do not know so much about important wars like the Vietnam War, the World War I and II, and the interventions in the Arabs countries.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • I know the importance of thise military industry, but I do not know so much about important wars like the Vietnam War, the World Wars I and II, and the interventions inof the US in Arabs countries.
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    • About the culture of the US, I know that in very little time they have developed a strong Ego and patriotism, based in ideas of democracy and freedom which it does not correspond with reality, making the US a really hypocrite country.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • AboutConcerning the culture of the US, I know that in very little time they have developed a strong Egosense of identity and patriotism, based in ideas of democracy and freedom which it does not correspond withto reality, making the US a really hypocriteical country.
    • About the culture of the US, I know that in very little time they have developed a strong Ego andIn US culture, I know that they quickly developed a large ego and are very patriotismc, based ion ideas of democracy and freedom which it doesdo not correspond with reality, making the US a really hypocriteical country.
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    • I am also awareness of social problems and how people deal with them, how the educational system works, typical traditions, famous people (most of them from Hollywood and the TV industry), music and even some American folktales.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • I am also awareness of of their social problems and how people deal with them, how the educational system works, typical traditions, famous people (most of them from Hollywood and the TV industry), music and even some American folktales.
    • I am also awareness of social problems and how people deal with them, how the educational system works, typical traditions, famous people (most of them from Hollywood and the TV industry), music and even some American folktales.
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    • I would like to know more about the wars where the US have intervened, about economy (What the FED is and how it works, and also about the American economic debt), how politics works in the US (democrats and republicans, and liberals and conservatives), and I am also interested in the founding fathers and all the presidents in general.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • I would like to know more about the wars where the US have intervened, about the economy (What the FED is and how it works, and also about the American economic debt), how politics works in the US (democrats and republicans, and liberals and conservatives), and I am also interested in the founding fathers and all the presidents in general.
    • I would like to know more about the wars where the US haves intervened, about the economy (Wwhat "the FEDed" is and how it works, and also about the American economic debt), how politics works in the US (dDemocrats and rRepublicans, and liberals and conservatives), and I am also interested in the founding fathers and all the pPresidents in general.
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