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    • Why still said just one China?

    • One time before,HongKong created a law about the baby milk powder.
    • Every adult can't baring more than 1.8kg baby milk powder,otherwise,that's breaking the law,must pay 500-2000 thousand HongKong dollars ,and put into the prison 2-7years.
    • Why HongKong creat this law ,that's because the mindland people go to HongKong to buy the foreign country baby mike powder, that make the HongKong baby haven't enough milk Powder to drink.
    • Why the mindland people go to the HongKong to buy it,that's because they just want to buy the safe milk powder.
  • Today,i saw a news about a NanJing people went to HongKong to bought a few pots milk nice floor,the HongKong customs locked up her.
  • Are we still in the war time?
  • It's the same to the "Chinese and the dogs can't come in".
  • Do you buy a milk powder in your "home" will break the law?
  • And in fact ,that's just the milk rice floor.
  • I can understand the HongKong mums hate the minldpeople buy the milk powder, just because that let their owner baby haven't enough milk to drink.
  • But I also can understand the mindland mums just want to give thire owner baby to drink the safe milk.
  • Honestly, i don't deink the milk produced in china besides i want to sick or dead.
  • A few days ago,I was buying the foreign country milk in the internet shop.
  • My mother said to me"why not drink the mlik powder?I can ask my colleague to buy it in HongKong." I think a a few seconds,said "no".
  • Just because don't want to get in trouble.

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    • Every adult can't baring more than 1.8kg baby milk powder,otherwise,that's breaking the law,must pay 500-2000 thousand HongKong dollars ,and put into the prison 2-7years.
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    • Everyach adult can't baring no more than 1.8 kg of baby milk powder,o across the border. Otherwise, that'sey are breaking the law, and must pay 500-2000 thousand Hong Kong dollars , and put into the prison 2-7they will be put in prison for 2 - 7 years.
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    • Why HongKong creat this law ,that's because the mindland people go to HongKong to buy the foreign country baby mike powder, that make the HongKong baby haven't enough milk Powder to drink.
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    • WThe reason why Hong Kong created this law ,that'is because the maindland people go to Hong Kong to buy the foreign country baby milke powder, that makeand as a result, the Hong Kong babyies don't haven't enough milk Ppowder to drinkfor themselves.
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    • Why the mindland people go to the HongKong to buy it,that's because they just want to buy the safe milk powder.
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    • WThe reason why the maindland people go to the Hong Kong to buy it,that' is because they just want to buy the safe milk powder.
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    • Today,i saw a news about a NanJing people went to HongKong to bought a few pots milk nice floor,the HongKong customs locked up her.
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    • I can understand the HongKong mums hate the minldpeople buy the milk powder, just because that let their owner baby haven't enough milk to drink.
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    • My mother said to me"why not drink the mlik powder?I can ask my colleague to buy it in HongKong." I think a a few seconds,said "no".
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