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    • When Fray Bartolome Arrazola felt lost it accepted that nothing could save him.
    • The mighty jungle of Guatemala had taken, implacable and definitive.
    • At his topographical ignorance he sat quietly waiting to die.
    • Wanted to die there, no hope, isolated, with fixed distant thought in Spain, particularly in the convent of thistles, where Carlos Quinto condescend once lose its eminence to say he trusted the religious zeal of his redeeming work .
    • When he awoke he found himself surrounded by a group of indigenous impassive face that were ready to sacrifice before an altar, an altar Bartholomew seemed like a bed on which rest, at last, their fears, their destination, self same.
    • Three years in the country had given it a medium domain of native languages.
  • He tried something.
  • He said some words that were understood.
    • Then he blossomed into an idea he had for worthy of his talent and universal culture and their hard knowledge of Aristotle.
    • He recalled that on that day a total solar eclipse expected.
    • And I decided, in the depths, make use of that knowledge to deceive their oppressors and save his life.
    • —He told them kill me if I can make the sun to darken at its height.
    • The Indians stared at him and Bartholomew shocked disbelief in his eyes.
    • He saw that there was a small tip and waited confidently, not without some disdain.
    • Two hours after the heart of Fray Bartolome Arrazola vehement dripping blood on the sacrificial stone (bright in the dim light of an eclipsed sun) while one of the natives, recited without inflection, slowly, one by one, the infinite dates of solar and lunar eclipses would occur, astronomers of the Mayan community had expected and recorded in his manuscripts without the valuable help of Aristotle.

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    • Wanted to die there, no hope, isolated, with fixed distant thought in Spain, particularly in the convent of thistles, where Carlos Quinto condescend once lose its eminence to say he trusted the religious zeal of his redeeming work .
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    • Wanteding to die there, no hope,without hope, feeling isolated, and with a fixed distant thought in Spain, (particularly in the cConvent of tThistles, where Carlos Quinto condescend once lose itsed), for the first time, he lost the eminence to say he trusted the religious zeal of his redeeming work .
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    • When he awoke he found himself surrounded by a group of indigenous impassive face that were ready to sacrifice before an altar, an altar Bartholomew seemed like a bed on which rest, at last, their fears, their destination, self same.
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    • When he awoke, he found himself surrounded by a group of indigenous impassive faces that were ready to do a sacrifice before an altar, a. An altar that seemed to Bartholomew seemed like a bed on which restto rest upon, at last, their fears, their destination, their self shame.
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    • Then he blossomed into an idea he had for worthy of his talent and universal culture and their hard knowledge of Aristotle.
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    • Then he, an idea blossomed into an idea he had for, worthy of his talent andof universal culture and their hardal awareness and strong knowledge of Aristotle.
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    • Two hours after the heart of Fray Bartolome Arrazola vehement dripping blood on the sacrificial stone (bright in the dim light of an eclipsed sun) while one of the natives, recited without inflection, slowly, one by one, the infinite dates of solar and lunar eclipses would occur, astronomers of the Mayan community had expected and recorded in his manuscripts without the valuable help of Aristotle.
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    • Two hours lafter, the heart of Fray Bartolome Arrazola was vehemently dripping blood on the sacrificial stone (so bright in the dim light of an eclipsed sun), while one of the natives, recited slowly, without inflection, slowly, one by one, the infinite dates of solar and lunar eclipses that would occur,have occurred according to the astronomers of the Mayan community had expected andand what was recorded in histheir manuscripts, without the valuable help of Aristotle.
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