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  • part of recommendation letter

  • Additional information that could be of importance to the scholarship award decision.
    • this will be for 3 assessor: The mechanical department offer assistance lecture position to Ali after he finished his master degree due to he finish the master degree in the first class but he reject because he has dream to go aboard and do his Ph.D. degree and I appreciate his decision and his ambition and I wish you give him chance to doing his Ph.D. degree.
    • Ali got the second class in mechanical engineering Department-university of Kufa , and he got excellent marks in his bachelor project and he very ambition young and I think you will give him chance to do his dream by award him the scholarship.
    • Ali come to Germany to achieve his Ph.D. in such advance country and such advance institute but he can’t doing his Ph.D. without your support.

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    • this will be for 3 assessor: The mechanical department offer assistance lecture position to Ali after he finished his master degree due to he finish the master degree in the first class but he reject because he has dream to go aboard and do his Ph.D. degree and I appreciate his decision and his ambition and I wish you give him chance to doing his Ph.D. degree.
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    • this will be for 3 assessors:¶¶The mechanical department offered an assistance lecture position to Ali after he finished his masters degree due tobecause he finish theed his masters degree in the first class, but he rejected because he has dreams to go aboard and do his Ph.D. degree and I appreciate his decision and his ambition and I wishhope you give him the chance to doingget his Ph.D. degree.
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    • Ali got the second class in mechanical engineering Department-university of Kufa , and he got excellent marks in his bachelor project and he very ambition young and I think you will give him chance to do his dream by award him the scholarship.
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    • Ali got the second class in mechanical engineering at theDepartment-university of Kufa , and he got excellent marks in his bachelor project and he. He's also very ambition youngus for a young person and I thinkhope you will give him the chance to dofulfil his dream by awarding him thea scholarship.
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    • Ali come to Germany to achieve his Ph.D. in such advance country and such advance institute but he can’t doing his Ph.D. without your support.
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    • Ali coame to Germany to achieve his Ph.D. in such an advanced country and such advanced institute, but he can’t doing his Ph.D. without your support. ¶
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