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- I just arrived from the church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home, in two days, will complete 3 years and 3 months together, stay with her is really gratefull.
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- I just arrived from the church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home, in two days, will complete 3 years and 3 months together, stay with her is really gratefull.
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- I just arrived from ~~the~~ church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home~~, i~~. In two days, we will complete 3 years and 3 months together~~, stay with her is really gratefull~~.
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- I just arrived from the church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home, in two days, we will ~~complete 3 years and 3 months together, stay with her is really gratefull~~have been together for 3 years and 3 months, I am really grateful to be staying with her.
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- By the away, thanks for all corrections, it's really helping me to be better writing.
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