Pataisymai

Text from Ignacio777 - English

    • mini SHORT STORIE: FACTORY OF...

    • I woke up start.
  • I didn't know who he was or what he was doing there.
    • A boy was packing weapons: put bullets in small boxes and packing them. —Who am I? -I asked. —Roberta... —How much?
    • —I are fucking - he added.
    • At that time, he pulled out a gun and shot at my back.
    • —They are everywhere, caution!
    • -He shouted, while he was still firing.
    • After a while, approached a man with a mis-adjusted shirt, grabbed me by the shoulder and said: —Each time we make them better.

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