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My sad experience.
- Dear Kayla, I’m sorry, that we haven’t communicated for a long time.
- But I know that we both were extremely busy.
- Nevertheless I hope this gap didn’t spoil our relationships.
- You know, a lot of unforgettable things happened with me during this time.
- However, let me tell you about only one occasion which made me feel various emotions.
- So, it was two months ago, in the end of July.
- One day my classmate Natalie rang up.
- I picked up the phone (although I’d regretted in consequence).
- - O, hey darling, - she started, - what’s new?
- How are you spending your holidays? - Well hello! I’m fine!
- I have got great holidays! And you?
- Frankly speaking, I was not happy as I can’t stand Natalie.
- She’s spoilt, lazy, irresponsible; sometimes rude hence she’s not exactly the life and soul of the party.
- So, Natalie continued…. - Me too!
- To be honest, I was just ringing to invite you at my birthday party.
- Do you remember about it, don’t you?
- Actually, I didn’t remember about Natalie’s birthday because I merely didn’t know!
- We never were close friends.
- Moreover we never were usual friends at all!
- Therefore it was “a bit” strange that she invited me at her birthday party, just like that.
- - Of course, I remember.
- But unfortunately I can’t cause… cause I’m leaving, - I replied uncertainly. - What a pity!
- And when will you arrive? – she asked.
- I was not sure what I should answer because I didn’t know the exact birthday’s date.
- At first I was going to tell lies that I was leaving my town forever.
- However I understood it was a silly idea.
- When I go to school I meet her every day.
- Therefore if I had told lies her she would have found out it later.
- In the end I decided to say something that could prevent me from going to the fete without a doubt.
- - Well, I will be in the town approximately in September, - I said.
- - Now I don’t understand what’s up?
- – she wondered.
- – My birthday is in October.
- I was in shock!
- Why did she invite me so early?
- After that I remembered that Natalie was in a not unusual habit of reminding about any holidays much earlier.
- But my memories didn’t rescue the situation. I had failed.
- So, in two months I went to the Natalia’s birthday party.
- I presented her flowers, the book “East of Eden” by John Steinbeck and beauty-set for girls in their mid-teens.
- At the party there were five teenagers else.
- Two of them, Gabriel and Jasmine, were simply classmates for me and the best friends for Natalia.
- Others were unfamiliar for me.
- At first the birthday girl acquainted me with them, I mean with Emily, Melissa and Landon.
- I seemed they were not bad people.
- To my mind they were different from Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine.
- It all started with a festive table.
- Everybody wished the birthday girl only the best.
- Gabriel and Jasmine said usual, primitive words.
- But Emily, Melissa and Landon had interesting, extraordinary phrases.
- In the first minutes I like divided our company in my thoughts because the difference was obvious.
- I couldn’t understand how such different people might hobnob.
- I thought so not only because of eloquence.
- Melissa, Emily and Landon were kind, polite, and also considerate.
- However Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine were opposite persons.
- We spend fun time.
- We took part in any cheerful competitions, song karaoke sings, danced and so on.
- I noticed that Emily supported any ideas, but Jasmine said it was stupid.
- However Emily tried to find a compromise and she managed.
- Melissa said that Natalie’s dress was nice, but Natalie didn’t even reply “thanks”, in contrast she said that Melissa’s blouse was out-of-date.
- The birthday girl was so inattentive that she didn’t unwrap boxes with presents.
- When we were leaving the house, Landon helped every girl on her overcoat, but Gabriel had pushing everybody and went off.
- My route and the route of Melissa, Emily and Landon were same.
- Initially we communicated very well. But later….
- Every of them started telling awful things about Natalie and her friends.
- They said that Gabriel and Jasmine were stupid dears, and Natalie was an ugly hence.
- Then they admitted that they came at this party because they had only one “important” reason.
- Emily, Landon and Melissa wanted to have something that they could remember in the future!
- I didn’t understand what had happened.
- Landon turned into unpleasant guy who spitted and used bad words.
- Girls became gossips.
- When I reached my house I was so disappointed.
- I believed I made new good friends, I admired them… but actually they were false.
- Frankly speaking I liked Natalie with her friends more than Melisa, Landon and Emily.
- Yes, Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine were not idyllic.
- But everybody knew it and didn’t expect from them honorable actions.
- They were real!
- That’s how it is.
- I want, dear Kayla that you will never be in the same situation.
- So, I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
- Best wishes, Tania.
- Tatiana19
August 2015
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