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Text from Tatiana19 - English

  • My sad experience.

    • Dear Kayla, I’m sorry, that we haven’t communicated for a long time.
  • But I know that we both were extremely busy.
    • Nevertheless I hope this gap didn’t spoil our relationships.
  • You know, a lot of unforgettable things happened with me during this time.
  • However, let me tell you about only one occasion which made me feel various emotions.
  • So, it was two months ago, in the end of July.
  • One day my classmate Natalie rang up.
  • I picked up the phone (although I’d regretted in consequence).
    • - O, hey darling, - she started, - what’s new?
  • How are you spending your holidays? - Well hello! I’m fine!
  • I have got great holidays! And you?
  • Frankly speaking, I was not happy as I can’t stand Natalie.
  • She’s spoilt, lazy, irresponsible; sometimes rude hence she’s not exactly the life and soul of the party.
  • So, Natalie continued…. - Me too!
  • To be honest, I was just ringing to invite you at my birthday party.
  • Do you remember about it, don’t you?
  • Actually, I didn’t remember about Natalie’s birthday because I merely didn’t know!
  • We never were close friends.
  • Moreover we never were usual friends at all!
  • Therefore it was “a bit” strange that she invited me at her birthday party, just like that.
  • - Of course, I remember.
  • But unfortunately I can’t cause… cause I’m leaving, - I replied uncertainly. - What a pity!
  • And when will you arrive? – she asked.
  • I was not sure what I should answer because I didn’t know the exact birthday’s date.
  • At first I was going to tell lies that I was leaving my town forever.
  • However I understood it was a silly idea.
  • When I go to school I meet her every day.
    • Therefore if I had told lies her she would have found out it later.
  • In the end I decided to say something that could prevent me from going to the fete without a doubt.
  • - Well, I will be in the town approximately in September, - I said.
  • - Now I don’t understand what’s up?
  • – she wondered.
  • – My birthday is in October.
  • I was in shock!
  • Why did she invite me so early?
  • After that I remembered that Natalie was in a not unusual habit of reminding about any holidays much earlier.
  • But my memories didn’t rescue the situation. I had failed.
  • So, in two months I went to the Natalia’s birthday party.
  • I presented her flowers, the book “East of Eden” by John Steinbeck and beauty-set for girls in their mid-teens.
  • At the party there were five teenagers else.
  • Two of them, Gabriel and Jasmine, were simply classmates for me and the best friends for Natalia.
  • Others were unfamiliar for me.
  • At first the birthday girl acquainted me with them, I mean with Emily, Melissa and Landon.
    • I seemed they were not bad people.
  • To my mind they were different from Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine.
  • It all started with a festive table.
  • Everybody wished the birthday girl only the best.
  • Gabriel and Jasmine said usual, primitive words.
  • But Emily, Melissa and Landon had interesting, extraordinary phrases.
  • In the first minutes I like divided our company in my thoughts because the difference was obvious.
  • I couldn’t understand how such different people might hobnob.
  • I thought so not only because of eloquence.
  • Melissa, Emily and Landon were kind, polite, and also considerate.
  • However Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine were opposite persons.
  • We spend fun time.
  • We took part in any cheerful competitions, song karaoke sings, danced and so on.
  • I noticed that Emily supported any ideas, but Jasmine said it was stupid.
  • However Emily tried to find a compromise and she managed.
  • Melissa said that Natalie’s dress was nice, but Natalie didn’t even reply “thanks”, in contrast she said that Melissa’s blouse was out-of-date.
  • The birthday girl was so inattentive that she didn’t unwrap boxes with presents.
  • When we were leaving the house, Landon helped every girl on her overcoat, but Gabriel had pushing everybody and went off.
  • My route and the route of Melissa, Emily and Landon were same.
  • Initially we communicated very well. But later….
  • Every of them started telling awful things about Natalie and her friends.
  • They said that Gabriel and Jasmine were stupid dears, and Natalie was an ugly hence.
  • Then they admitted that they came at this party because they had only one “important” reason.
  • Emily, Landon and Melissa wanted to have something that they could remember in the future!
  • I didn’t understand what had happened.
  • Landon turned into unpleasant guy who spitted and used bad words.
  • Girls became gossips.
  • When I reached my house I was so disappointed.
  • I believed I made new good friends, I admired them… but actually they were false.
  • Frankly speaking I liked Natalie with her friends more than Melisa, Landon and Emily.
  • Yes, Natalie, Gabriel and Jasmine were not idyllic.
  • But everybody knew it and didn’t expect from them honorable actions.
  • They were real!
  • That’s how it is.
  • I want, dear Kayla that you will never be in the same situation.
  • So, I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
  • Best wishes, Tania.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English