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Text from Rumeysaakgn - English

    • MAYBE IN A MILLION YEAR

    • I saw you with a white horse in my dream yesterday.
    • I'm not a princess and also you don't deserve to being a prince, I know that.
    • We are both human, there is only one difference between us: you are not able to love, but I can give you all my heart.
    • I'm scared of your eyes' reality.
    • They are so blue that just like they include a cold ocean in it, if I can look closer I'm sure that I can see the waves somewhere in there.
    • They are as sharp as an ice but as calm as a cloudless ski (how can I rewrite this sentence by using "despite"?); so blue that my eyes on fire when I look at them.
    • I'm standing cross the beach now and I'm thinking of you without any regret.
    • It's rainy here.
    • The sea smells like death or life, I can't decide which one of them..

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English