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    • Experience Is The Best Teacher

    • In my view experience is the best teacher, because you it’s more educative, and it’s more fun than and more efficient than sitting in a classroom learning theories and not applying them in reality which would not give any value, nor any sense of validity for two reasons.
    • First, experience is the best teacher because it’s more educative than sitting in a classroom all the time with reviewing rules and theories that is not applied in a real world.
  • For example, sitting in a class and learning about the engine how it has to be repaired theoretically is totally different from opening infront of you and taking it piece by piece to fixing the issue, and then putting it all together, which is real.
  • And having a feeling that you accomplished something, and making progress in the learning.
    • Additionally will improve and help in developing new skills, and facing real problems that cant be solved theoretically, which shows the vital role for the need of experience.
    • Second, learning things in a real world is more fun, this is because psychologically a person would feel more in comfort and would taste his real contribution to the society, which would bush him to do more and participate in many events.
    • For instance, when a worker is working on a project in his team member, participating with his colleagues and trying to finish the project within its frame time, it would make the process of doing it more enjoyable and add enthusiasm to the group, which will be an advantage to the group as a whole, and would build a good relation with workers, and thus the workers wont feel bored in their job.
    • All in all, learning in a school, and from textbooks would be good.
    • However, I believe that experience is the best teacher, and would help more the people to cultivate themselves and improve the society.

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    • In my view experience is the best teacher, because you it’s more educative, and it’s more fun than and more efficient than sitting in a classroom learning theories and not applying them in reality which would not give any value, nor any sense of validity for two reasons.
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    • In my view experience is the best teacher, because you it’s more educative, and it’s more fun thanfunnier and more efficient than sitting in a classroom learning theories and not applying them in reality which would not give any value, nor any sense of validity for two reasons.
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    • First, experience is the best teacher because it’s more educative than sitting in a classroom all the time with reviewing rules and theories that is not applied in a real world.
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    • First, experience is the best teacher because it’s more educative than sitting in a classroom all the time with reviewing rules and theories that isare not applied in athe real world.
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    • For example, sitting in a class and learning about the engine how it has to be repaired theoretically is totally different from opening infront of you and taking it piece by piece to fixing the issue, and then putting it all together, which is real.
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    • Additionally will improve and help in developing new skills, and facing real problems that cant be solved theoretically, which shows the vital role for the need of experience.
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    • Additionally it will improve and help in developing new skills, and facinge real problems that can't be solved theoretically, which shows the vital role for the need of experience.
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    • Second, learning things in a real world is more fun, this is because psychologically a person would feel more in comfort and would taste his real contribution to the society, which would bush him to do more and participate in many events.
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    • Second, learning things in athe real world is more fun, t. This is because psychologically a person would feel more in comfortable and would taste his real contribution to the society, which would bpush him to do more and participate in many events.
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    • For instance, when a worker is working on a project in his team member, participating with his colleagues and trying to finish the project within its frame time, it would make the process of doing it more enjoyable and add enthusiasm to the group, which will be an advantage to the group as a whole, and would build a good relation with workers, and thus the workers wont feel bored in their job.
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    • For instance, when a worker is working on a project inwith his team member, participating with his colleagues and trying to finish the project within its frame time, it would make the process of doing it more enjoyable and add enthusiasm to the group, which will be an advantage to the group as a whole, and would build a good relation with workers, and thus the workers wonuldn't feel bored in their job.
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    • However, I believe that experience is the best teacher, and would help more the people to cultivate themselves and improve the society.
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    • However, I believe that experience is the best teacher, and would help more the people to cultivate themselves and improve the society. ¶
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