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  • The Invasion of the barbarians - Part 1

  • Everything began in a hot Wednesday January.
  • Was a month to put readings in day.
  • Forget the world there out and dedicate themselves for thirty days in a imaginary world of the books! Brammm!
  • The room door slammed violenty agaisnt the wall.
  • They opened with a powerful bomb: the kick.
  • The barbarians arrived.
  • -Dad, I want to play video game!
  • -Uncle, I want to milk shake!
  • -Uncle, I want to juice!
  • -Dad, I want to cookie!
  • Everyone talked at the same time, demanding their rights.
  • They was six angels: Daniel and André his children, Maurício, Vinícius, Lucas, Mayra only barbarian girl, his nephews.
  • - Mothers irresponsible, they left their children in this tiny place and they going to the shopping.
  • How I will read with so much noise!?
  • Meanwhile, the children began a pillows war at master bedroom.
  • José Cláudio da Silva

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