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I am a young man that has always been fascinated by how Nature works, and considering that we , as human beings, are part of Nature too, human biology drives absolutely my attention as a field of study.

That’s why I felt very fortunate when I came across your advertisement and I found out that you offer a master in Human Developmental Biology.

Considering that there are very few colleges that offer such studies and that yours has always been recognized as a prestigious center I would be really delighted to study at Newmore College.

Given that I have always academically succeed in spite of my family’s limited economical resources, I would like to keep going like that and thus I would like to apply for your financial aid.

There shall be no problems in taking advantage of your economical help as it will help me making the most out of your classes and practicum program.

Furthermore, I feel excited about being able to use your facilities as I haven’t got yet the opportunity to use such modern ones.

I am also applying for a place at this course due to the well-known relationship that the college has with some very important clinics, for instance the National Embryologic Research Institute and the European Assisted Reproduction Center.

You offer to all the admitted students in the course the chance to start as an apprentice at this places once they finish the theorical lessons, which I think that’s a once in a life opportunity to start a bright career.

I would very much thank you if you considered the possibility of admitting me as a student with one of the scholarship you offer in the course aforementioned.

I hope you take into account both my academic background that I attached to this personal statement and my enthusiasm to start right off studying and working as an embryologist thanks to your college.