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My first personal statement
- I am a young man that has always been fascinated by how Nature works, and considering that we , as human beings, are part of Nature too, human biology drives absolutely my attention as a field of study.
- That’s why I felt very fortunate when I came across your advertisement and I found out that you offer a master in Human Developmental Biology.
- Considering that there are very few colleges that offer such studies and that yours has always been recognized as a prestigious center I would be really delighted to study at Newmore College.
- Given that I have always academically succeed in spite of my family’s limited economical resources, I would like to keep going like that and thus I would like to apply for your financial aid.
- There shall be no problems in taking advantage of your economical help as it will help me making the most out of your classes and practicum program.
- Furthermore, I feel excited about being able to use your facilities as I haven’t got yet the opportunity to use such modern ones.
- I am also applying for a place at this course due to the well-known relationship that the college has with some very important clinics, for instance the National Embryologic Research Institute and the European Assisted Reproduction Center.
- You offer to all the admitted students in the course the chance to start as an apprentice at this places once they finish the theorical lessons, which I think that’s a once in a life opportunity to start a bright career.
- I would very much thank you if you considered the possibility of admitting me as a student with one of the scholarship you offer in the course aforementioned.
- I hope you take into account both my academic background that I attached to this personal statement and my enthusiasm to start right off studying and working as an embryologist thanks to your college.
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