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- hello everyone last year , i givet a life to my first baby , my little sweet CAMILLA she have 14 months.
- iam soo happy to be mother

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- hello everyone last year , i givet a life to my first baby , my little sweet CAMILLA she have 14 months.
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- hHello everyone~~¶¶last year , i~~, ¶I giave~~t a life~~ birth to my first ~~baby~~ , my little and sweet baby CAMILLA ~~she have~~. She is 14 months. old.
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- hHello everyone,¶¶lLast year ~~, i~~I giave~~t a life~~ birth to my first baby , my sweet little ~~sweet~~ CAMILLA. sShe ~~have~~is 14 months. old.
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- iam soo happy to be mother
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- ¶iI am ~~soo~~very happy to be a mother .¶
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- ¶iI am soo happy to be a mother .¶
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