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    • The inclusion of physicians in the network is expected to have an impact on their practice by itself because of the Hawthorne effect.
    • This, in addition to the non-response bias would affect the external validity of future epidemiological studies carried on with data gathered by the network.
    • Though we will implement measures to attenuate this phenomenon, it is expected to remain in an uncertain magnitude.
    • Nevertheless, this will not be detrimental to the projet execution as its main aim is to improve patient’s care and participant physician’s awareness of drug safety in older patients.

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    • The inclusion of physicians in the network is expected to have an impact on their practice by itself because of the Hawthorne effect.
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    • The inclusion of physicians in the network is expected to have an impact on their practice by itselfindividual practice because of the Hawthorne effect.
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    • This, in addition to the non-response bias would affect the external validity of future epidemiological studies carried on with data gathered by the network.
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    • This, in addition to the non-response bias, would affect the external validity of future epidemiological studies carried onut with data gathered by the network.
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    • Though we will implement measures to attenuate this phenomenon, it is expected to remain in an uncertain magnitude.
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    • Though we will implement measures to attenuate this phenomenon, it is expected to remain in, although to an uncertain magnitudeextent.
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    • Nevertheless, this will not be detrimental to the projet execution as its main aim is to improve patient’s care and participant physician’s awareness of drug safety in older patients.
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    • Nevertheless, this will not be detrimental to the project execution as its main aim is to improve patient’s care and participant physicians' awareness of drug safety in older patients.
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