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    • Help me please! It's very important for me

  • The title of the book, and most of its tone, derive from the contrast between Elinor's character and her younger sister.
  • The story begins with the death of Mr. Dashwood.
  • Dashwood extracts a promise from his son, that he will take care of his half-sisters.
  • However, John's selfish and greedy wife, Fanny, soon persuades him to renege.
  • Mrs. Dashwood begins looking for somewhere else to live.
  • In the meantime, Fanny's brother, Edward Ferrars, a pleasant, unassuming, intelligent but reserved young man, visits Norland .
  • He and Miss Eleanor fall in love .
  • But soon the Mrs. Dashwood moves her family to Barton Cottage in Devonshire, near the home of her cousin, Sir John Middleton.
    • And Miss Eleanor leaves and not telling about your feelings Edward.
    • And the whole book of their lives intersect, Eleanor thinks about him all the time, but does not allow his feelings to come out.
    • John warmly met Miss Ashwood with her daughters and soon introduced her to his wife and best friend of Colonel Brendan.
  • It soon becomes apparent that Colonel Brandon is attracted to Marianne .And during the whole book, he treats her with warmth and tenderness .But Mariella meets another...
    • But that's not the end of history...And then the whole book about their emotional and amorous stress.
    • I will keep on intrigue for those who suddenly did not read the book and watched the movie.

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