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  • The exchanges

  • Today I'm going to talk about spaces and exchanges.
  • A space can be defined as an area provided for a particular purpose.
  • Exchange is the act of giving and recieving in substitution for something else.
  • Exchanges can take many forms : exchanges between people, for trade, exchange of information...Nowadays, exchanges have increased a lot.
  • What does today's globalization provides to space and exchanges ?
  • First, I'm going to talk about exchange through the New Technologies of Information and Comunication.
  • Then, I'll talk about the exchange in the field of transport and travelling.
  • In class, we've studied Couch Surfing.
  • It's a website with which you can visit other countries, make friends all over the world, improve your language skills...
  • Social networks can be the source of a lot of exchanges too ; for example, in Second Life, you can visit virtual spaces, fictional cities, but at the same time speak with real people.
  • We can also talk about Facebook, which allows you talk to your friends when you're abroad, or to keep in touch with people you haven't seen for a long time.
  • But we have to be careful about these networks because we can become addicted and destroy our relations in reality.
  • In the same way, virtual schools can destroy bonds between children and take them away from the comunity.
  • They can be useful but they can also drag you in a virtual world and makes you lose the sense of reality.
  • Exchange also are greatly developing through the tourism industry and travelling.
  • Student exchange provides you more independance, new experiences.
  • It can make vanish your stereotypes about a country, and you can learn plenty of things about other cultures.
  • But you can be scared of not understanding the language, or not being able to speak correctly and say what you want, which is the language barrier.
  • You can also meet dangerous people when you're alone in a country that you don't know.
  • Finally, you can miss your family and friends.
  • In the exchanges, we can also count the migratory flows.
  • These flows concern poor people going to rich countries to find a job, or to run away from a country in a dangerous political situation.
  • Of course, some people migrate for personal reasons too, like for love or a special interest in the country.
  • In conclusion, due to the new tecnologies, we can comunicate through real or fictional spaces, as long as we don't get adicted.
  • There are different ways to travel through websites or studying abroad.
  • Spaces and exchanges allows the interaction between men and societies.
  • It gives us the power to explore geographical and symbolic areas.

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