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Hi, I am Tanya.
- I like to read, watch films, listen to music :D My hobbies it is write the poems, take a photo, play drums, also I like collecting cactuses, but generally I have a many hobbies..
- I very want to learn the English language and I must to learn it.
- Please, help me in this study :3 I hope you ^______^

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- I like to read, watch films, listen to music :D My hobbies it is write the poems, take a photo, play drums, also I like collecting cactuses, but generally I have a many hobbies..
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- I like to read, watch films, listen to music :D My hobbies ~~it is write the~~are writing poems, tak~~e a~~ing photos, playing drums, also I like collecting cactuses, but generally I have aso many hobbies..
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- I like to read, watch films, and listen to music :D. My hobbies ~~it is write the~~are: writing poems, tak~~e a~~ing photo, playing drums, a~~lso I like~~nd collecting cact~~uses, but generally~~i. I have a many hobbies..
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- I very want to learn the English language and I must to learn it.
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- Please, help me in this study :3 I hope you ^______^
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