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    • DOWN WITH SKY

    • There is a Boy who lives in the forest.
    • He lives with his Father, his Mother and his little Sister.
    • They are the only humans in forest and they find everything they need to survive the there.
  • One day, the food starts to become scarce.
    • The animals disappeared and trees were not giving any fruit.
  • The family was starving.
    • It seemed only a question of time before they died if something wasn't done.
    • So the Father decided to travel to seek for food.
    • He left the Mother, the Sister and the Boy alone.
    • After the Father left, the Boy became responsible to feed the family.
    • Everyday he woke up earlier and went to the forest to hunt.
    • When he was lucky, he fished three or four fish or found some fruit.
    • One day the boy couldn't find anything to eat.
  • No fish, no fruit, no eggs. Nothing.
    • The Boy and his family went four days without food.
    • The Boy was almost ready to give up of all of the suffering.
    • He walked to a cliff intended to jump.
    • He was ready to jump from the cliff, when he saw a strong light on the horizon, like a star falling from the sky, landing on the top of a big mountain.
    • The Boy knew that was a chance to find some food and immediately ran to the mountain which was far away.
  • After running for a long time, the boy reached the top of the mountain. It was night.
  • The boy walked cautiously around the place.
  • He knew something was there.
    • Hidden in the darkness, an Alien observed the Boy.
    • The Alien had a thermoview, which gave him the vantage of seeing the Boy while the only thing the boy could see was a thick darkness.
  • The Alien, as well as the kid, was hungry.
  • He traveled throughout the galaxies until he found the Earth and something to eat.
  • When the Boy was distracted the Alien attacked him with its own arms.
  • The Boy was wounded on his ribs and only then realized he was not alone.
  • The Alien and the Boy fought against each other.
  • It was almost a fist fight.
  • The E.T. didn't have any superpower besides his view.
  • After a long fight, the Boy broke down the Alien and had the chance to kill him with a lance in his neck.
  • In that moment, the E.
  • T. revealed a new power.
  • The Boy was taking inside a mind travel like he was seeing the memories of the Alien.
  • Then, the boy saw the home planet of the Alien.
  • The Alien was also a boy in his planet.
  • The resources were over there too and the Alien traveled to find some food for his family.
  • The Boy left his trance and came to back to consciousness.
  • The Boy look to the Alien through the darkness when his own belly made a strenuous noise.
  • A rumble sound came from his stomach.
  • The Boy, facing his own hunger, killed the Alien making a hole in his throat.
  • The boy carried the Alien's body to his Mother.
  • She lit a bonfire and cooked the Alien.
  • They had a good dinner that night.

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