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I live nearby the beach
- I moved to California few month ago.
- I really got lucky because we found an appartement nearby the beach.
- Believe it or not, since I've lived nearby the beach I don't spend anymore time there.

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- I live nearby the beach
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- I moved to California few month ago.
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- I moved to California few months ago.
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- I really got lucky because we found an appartement nearby the beach.
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- IWe were really ~~got~~ lucky because we found an appartement nearby the beach.
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- Believe it or not, since I've lived nearby the beach I don't spend anymore time there.
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- Believe it or not, since I've limoved nearby the beach, I don't spend ~~anymore~~that much time there.
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