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- My life
- I am born in st petersburg in 1979 year.
- I have mum , dad and little sister.
- Now i live near st petersburg in my house.
- Near my home little river.
- There is more fish. I lke this is.
- Now i have femaly.
- My wife and two kids.
- How are you my english?

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- My life
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- My lLife
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Ayat 1
- I am born in st petersburg in 1979 year.
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- I amwas born in ~~st p~~ Saint Petersburg in 1979 ~~year~~.
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Ayat 2
- I have mum , dad and little sister.
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- I have ~~mum ,~~a mom, a dad and a little sister.
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Ayat 3
- Now i live near st petersburg in my house.
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- Now iI live near ~~st p~~St. Petersburg in my house.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Near my home little river.
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- Near my home there is a little river.
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- ~~Near my home~~There is a little river. near my home.¶
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- There is more fish. I lke this is.
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- ~~There is more~~In the river, There are many fishes. I like this is.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
Ayat 6
- Now i have femaly.
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- Now i, I have ~~fema~~my own family.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
Ayat 7
- My wife and two kids.
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- MIn my own family, I have my wife and two kids.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
Ayat 8
- How are you my english?
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- How ~~are you~~is my english level?
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8

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