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Pesan dari Madamequi - English

  • Can we trust the TV?

    • Today we are more and more channels on TV, different programs, different journalists, but still what is said is frequently the same.
  • The press and the journalists seem to choose their subjects for a reason.
  • So can we really trust the TV shows if they control what they show?
    • First, I would say that there is no need for people to know what happens everywhere, the life is too short to loose time in front a TV watching bad news, and too short to be sad for something we can not change.
    • To me it is vital that people understand that the real life happens in reality, not in a TV, and that every journalist can interpret an image the way he wants.
    • I assume that if something is really important, we will heard about it everywhere : schools, office, on the red lines;.. so the fact that somebody doesn't watch TV doesn't mean that he is ignorant, but simply that he has many others things to do to enjoy his life.
    • You would ask to me, why being so anti-TV?
    • Because when you turn on the TV, you see that every channels shows the same informations, although there are a lot of more informations to talk about but still, they choose the same of all the others; because they need to attract people to make profits, and there is a need to keep people entertained from the real issues.
    • If I should give one only advice to the world: If you wanna know what happens somewhere, then go by yourself.

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    • First, I would say that there is no need for people to know what happens everywhere, the life is too short to loose time in front a TV watching bad news, and too short to be sad for something we can not change.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • First, I would say that there is no need for people to know what happens everywhere, the life is too short to loose time in front a TV watching bad news, and too short to be sad for something we can not change.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
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    • To me it is vital that people understand that the real life happens in reality, not in a TV, and that every journalist can interpret an image the way he wants.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • ToFor me it is vital that people understand that the real life happens in reality, not ion a TV, and that every journalist can interpret an image in the way he wants.
      SvetlanaNazarovaSvetlanaNazarova profile picture Komentar
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
  • Kalimat 6
    • I assume that if something is really important, we will heard about it everywhere : schools, office, on the red lines;.. so the fact that somebody doesn't watch TV doesn't mean that he is ignorant, but simply that he has many others things to do to enjoy his life.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • I assume that if something is really important, we will heard about it everywhere : schools, offices, on the red lines;.. so the fact that somebody doesn't watch TV doesn't mean that he is ignorant, but simply that he has many others things to do to enjoy his life.
      SvetlanaNazarovaSvetlanaNazarova profile picture Komentar
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
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    • Because when you turn on the TV, you see that every channels shows the same informations, although there are a lot of more informations to talk about but still, they choose the same of all the others; because they need to attract people to make profits, and there is a need to keep people entertained from the real issues.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • BecauseAnswer is, when you turn on the TV, you see that every channels shows the same informations, although there are a lot of more informations to talkreport about but still, they choose the same oflike all the others; because they need to attract people to make profits, and there is a need to keep people entertained from the real issues.
      SvetlanaNazarovaSvetlanaNazarova profile picture Komentar
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8
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