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The article I'd like to render is entitled 'The way to develop the child at school'.

The author reveals some drawbacks of development and education of children.

The author's communicative aim is to make teachers reconsider their attitude to their position of teaching and give some advice for parents who should invest in children the correct view of the school and provide them with the knowledge, which is hard and serious work.

In this article the author touches upon several problems of education such as: a problem of pedagogy development, a problem of a lack of teachers, a problem of family relations, a problem of laziness of children and so on.

In the beginning of his article the author mentions that the pedagogy development is the problem that is very hard to solve.

This situation is not due to the fact that in schools there is a lack of computers and videos.

It is an improper installation for teaches, who should give children the knowledge, skills and abilities.

The author declares that it is so primitive and ineffective for education.

The school is not a storehouse of ready-made knowledge, no the place for the poor and feeding station.

The main aim for school is to develop a child's personality that he can obtain, not to get knowledge.

Teachers and parents should cultivate in the children curiosity and proactive in acquiring knowledge.

The author gives us an example, in which he says to blame not only the right attitude of the schools but family life and spiritual poverty of family relationships.

The author declares that children often get knowledge not because of their desire, but by cramming material, teacher training and push their feathers' belts.

I share the author's opinion that the above-mentioned problems still exist today.

Teachers should interest children acquiring knowledge and give it to them in portions, so students have the desire to discover for themselves the material, explore something.

In other words, parents and teachers should involve children in the education process, make it interesting and not so boring.