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Hi, my name is Yohan Gomez.
- I'm 28 years old, I want to learn englihs because I want immigrate in search of opportunities for my family and improves conditions in the future for my daughters.
- Thank you every one, your help will be invaluable to my learning.

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- My First Paragraph
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- Hi, my name is Yohan Gomez.
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câu 2
- I'm 28 years old, I want to learn englihs because I want immigrate in search of opportunities for my family and improves conditions in the future for my daughters.
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- I'm 28 years old,¶ I want to learn eEnglihsh because I want to immigrate infor search ofing of better opportunities for my family and to improve~~s conditions in~~ the future conditions for my daughters.
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- Thank you every one, your help will be invaluable to my learning.
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- Thank ~~you~~s to every one, your help will be invaluable tofor my ~~learn~~studying.
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