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My Dream

• i want to tell you about my dream.

• well, just like other people, i want to travel the world.

• especially Europe, why ?

• I think, europe is great place. I love london.

• my sister told me that i'm naive, why ?

• because i never visited london, but i'm already loved it.

• Lol I need a lot of money to travel the world right ?

• i have to workhard.

• please correct my error.