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  • Dear Roxy, I am writing to you from a comprehensive school in New Jersey, in which I moved last summer.
    • I'm all good, I like to learning process and the people, who surround me.
  • You probably don't know, but there was chaos 2 years ago.
    • The whole educational system was out of step with progress and technical equipments of the school was just hideous.
    • Once, an influential person came in our town, who was interested in the development and provision of all schools in the North-Eastern part of the USA.
    • He was called Mr. Locwood.
    • He was written in the local newspapers.
    • Now he got an information about our school across to the neighbouring town and immediately took an interest in its.
  • He compeled the local authority to make a breakthrough in improving the infrastructure of this building.
  • He decidedly took up the job.
    • Just a few month, he completely changed the appearance of the school and also eliminated some problems connected with incompetence of teachers and formed a new staff.
  • Now, my school is one of the most crucial sights of my country.
    • I am very proud of its.
  • I hope, that your daughter will study in a school like mine.
    • By the way, how did you go to sea in your holiday?
  • Looking forward to your answer. See you later.
  • Best wishes, Emma.

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