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    • One big American social rights issue of the 2000's is homosexual rights.
    • This essay will discuss whether homosexuals shold be allowed to marry.
    • There are many reasons why homosexuals should be allowed to marry.
    • First of all everyone should try to be happy in their life.
    • So if a man dreams to marry another man, he should be allowed to do this.
    • Secondly the marriage is a way to protect your husband or your wife, expecially regard to economic problems.
    • However because of the many problems homosexual marriages cause, I feel we should not allowed their union.
    • Firstly if a man dreams to spend all his life with another man, he can do it.
    • He don't need the marriage.
    • Furthermore there are many others ways to give an economic stability to a person you love.
  • You can give him or her money, you can buy him or her a flat.
    • In summary there are good reasons both for and against to allow omosexual marriage.
    • However, I feel strongly that the term marriage shold be exclusive to heterosexual unions.

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