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    • When I was in my graduation from 9, when finished the ceremony, Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulate me.
    • Later, we went by car to Xiomy's home to drank something, but I don't know what was.
    • At dinner, she started to record all and she record me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw me on the film, I started to smile.
    • Later, we went to pc to chat with our friends, I like chat, she don't like too.
    • I like write letters, Xiomy and I together have a notebook where we write, is as a daily.

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    • When I was in my graduation from 9, when finished the ceremony, Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulate me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I was inAfter my graduation from 9, when finished the ceremony,ceremony, my friend Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulated me.
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      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • When I was in my graduation from 9, when finished theAfter the graduation ceremony, Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulate me.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • At dinner, she started to record all and she record me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw me on the film, I started to smile.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At dinner, she startedWhile we were having dinner Xiomy began to record allit and she recorded me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw meyself on the film, I started to smile.
      vonHikervonHiker profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • At dinner, she started to record all and she record me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw meyself on the film, I started to smile.
      haiKichaiKic profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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