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Text z fajo - English

  • Life is beautiful

  • Recently, I wrote about the life of many people all around the world.
    • I said we are like assholes with a shitlife.
    • Now I think it's an hard opinion and I want to correcting this, please.
    • Imagine you are living in a noisy buildind, in an infamous suburb of a big town.
    • There are robbers, murderers and your children meet them everery days in every streets.
    • You have to watching out for drug dealers because you are afraid for them.
    • You are disappointed because you are not barely money to change location.
  • Or imagine you are so tired, you leave your office after a bad journey.
    • Every days, you must sttrugle against some hours of congestion forward you arrive at home.
    • During your back, you see men and women homeless, in their poor conditions of life everywhere.
  • Or imagine you are living in one of the poorest countries in the world.
    • You don't have food, you have old clothes and barefoot, and you have to looking for something in a mountain of rubbishs, and sold it for buying food.
    • Eventually, you say to yourself life is beautiful.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English