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Text from Ariantisan - English

    • The love that burn my heart

    • I did not know , why it happend to my heart when they laughed together, and loved each other in front of me .I realized , it was really pain, the pain itself like my heart stabbed by a thousand of knife which was sharpe,but both were my friends. i was wondering ,what really happend to me.Hopefully i would get the answering from this situation.

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    • I did not know , why it happend to my heart when they laughed together, and loved each other in front of me .I realized , it was really pain, the pain itself like my heart stabbed by a thousand of knife which was sharpe,but both were my friends. i was wondering ,what really happend to me.Hopefully i would get the answering from this situation.
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    • I did not know , why it happened to my heart w. When they laughed together, and loved each other in front of me, .I realized , it was really pain, the pain itself likeful. A pain like having my heart stabbed by a thousand of knife which was sharpe,but bothsharp knives, but they were both my friends. i I was wondering , what really happened to me. Hopefully iI would get thean answering from this situation.
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