添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Ariantisanからのテキスト - English

    • The love that burn my heart

    • I did not know , why it happend to my heart when they laughed together, and loved each other in front of me .I realized , it was really pain, the pain itself like my heart stabbed by a thousand of knife which was sharpe,but both were my friends. i was wondering ,what really happend to me.Hopefully i would get the answering from this situation.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English