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Text from vaness182 - English

  • February 28th

  • Today is Thursday, February 28th.
  • The last day of month.
  • Yesterday I thought: the university most important of the city will do the admissions exams.
  • Then I want go, maybe I don't pass, or I'm small (a baby) but I want do the test for a future know what it feel like somebody go to University.
  • Then, today after classes, I said to Xiomy, baby, can you go with me to the bank to pay the exams.
  • She surprised, and gave her support.
  • When we arrived the back, had a long long row, then I said, Xiomy fill the paper and I do the queuing, then she filled the paper and I did the queuing, when she gave me de paper, I said to her: "sit down", and she went to take a chair, then when hang out, she said me, changed, I do the queuing and you sit down.
  • When I paid the exams, we got out to the bank and I felt quiet.
  • The back is within of the mall, the mall have a minipark on the centre of there.
  • When we got out, I needed lay down on the grass, and she lay down on my legs.
  • Now, I doing my homeworks, after I have a dinner, and when I go to my bed, I will be with my legs up against the wall with my back against my bed, so my legs rest.

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