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  • About an positive change, waited for somebody, future plan, hel

  • This is an exercise.
    • I thought that punctuality be of no great importance. but I know that bad habit not only affect my life, but also trouble to others.so I changed myself, I make a reasonable plan to I can win in the work with my partners. you Know, it would be in my partners best interest to do not become a person who add trouble and no concept of time.
    • This ideal comes from my experience that I waiting for my friend.
    • One day, my friend Mary and I supposed to go to the cinema, I am not late, but she was late for an hour, my mood from anxiety changed to angry.
  • Although I am unhappy, I do not blame her.
  • I think I always let someone waiting for me, they must have felt uncomfortable.
  • I learned the value of time, but also learned that I need time to. in order to change this bad habit，I booked time plan.
  • Fortunately I correct my mistake.
  • I have set mind on revising the plan why use it to realize my future plans.
  • For example, I want to be a design team leader, then I need to growth professional and management of the experience, it is time to customize a time schedule.
  • Rationally distribute time between learn and work all day.
  • My colleagues and I discussed this plan, They found my thoughts to help their work, The reason is that we are all at the same time more than 3 projects.
  • After a period of implementation, our whole team work efficiency becomes higher.
  • Maybe I'll win I always wanted to win team progress award.

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    • I thought that punctuality be of no great importance. but I know that bad habit not only affect my life, but also trouble to others.so I changed myself, I make a reasonable plan to I can win in the work with my partners. you Know, it would be in my partners best interest to do not become a person who add trouble and no concept of time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I thought that punctuality would be of no great importance. but I know that bad habits not only affect my life, but also trouble to others.so So, I changed myself,. I makde a reasonable plan too. I can win in the work with my partners. yYou Kknow, it would be in my partners' best interest to do not become a person who adds trouble and no concept of time.
      MangekyouRamenMangekyouRamen profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • One day, my friend Mary and I supposed to go to the cinema, I am not late, but she was late for an hour, my mood from anxiety changed to angry.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One day, my friend Mary and I were supposed to go to the cinema,. I amwas not late, but she was late for an hour, m. My mood from anxiety changed to angery.
      MangekyouRamenMangekyouRamen profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • I learned the value of time, but also learned that I need time to. in order to change this bad habit，I booked time plan.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • For example, I want to be a design team leader, then I need to growth professional and management of the experience, it is time to customize a time schedule.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
  • câu 12
    • My colleagues and I discussed this plan, They found my thoughts to help their work, The reason is that we are all at the same time more than 3 projects.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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