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Text from JoanaMendes - English

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  • My name is Joana Mafalda Ferreira Mendes, I completed my masters degree in Pharmaceutical Sciences in November 2014, at Faculty of Pharmacy at the University of Porto (FFUP), the best pharmacy school in Portugal, and now I am intending to apply for the graduate programme in Regulatory Affairs in Novo Nordisk.
  • As a student with a masters in Pharmaceutical Sciences, I had the opportunity to gain a solid advanced formation in specific areas of health sciences and technology.
  • To support this formation, I joined the Pharmacology research group at FFUP.
  • This project promoted my involvement and interest in research activities and I joined the ERASMUS programme where I continued the development work of research in an internship at the Institute for Natural Products Research at UFRJ, in Brazil.
  • During the time that I lived in Brazil, I discovered that I have a passion for learning about other places and different cultures.
  • Outside of my comfortable zone, this experience has made me more independent, mature and open to the possibility of becoming a pharmacist in another country.
  • Today, I am sure this is my first choice and this is one of the main reasons that influenced me to join this programme.
  • Despite of completed course of the master degree, I never negleted other opportunities that this educational institution could offer me.
  • So, I was member of the Council of Representatives, like student representative, member of Students’ Association of FFUP, of Junior Association for Entrepreneurship and Innovation and Mobility group of FFUP.
  • My passage by different student groups allowed me to work on many different projects in numerous departments realizing multiple tasks and developing different interpersonal, relationship and communication skills and I learned to work in team, where I was coordinated by others but and I coordinated too, and get along with people from different cultures, skills, perspectives and experience.
  • I developed an interest in regulatory affairs in that I came from a research group where anyone became more and more focused in research and I realized my interests lay more in a broader, bigger picture than a narrow picture on a project.
  • That's what first drew me to look around for other jobs and really attracted me to regulatory and I found a way to make a difference in patients’ lives participating in shepherding medical products from inception to market.
  • I think the opportunity to work at the interface between business and government regulations that a position in regulatory affairs can offered me is the best for me.
  • Despite of my lack regulatory affairs experience, I know that some of my characteristics can help me to become a good professional in this area, such as, to be very communicative, well organized, multi-task and love team and paperwork, and the approaching with different health authorities in different countries it will be very positive to my career.
  • The rotation of this programme encouraged me to apply because I know that I can learn many of new areas with brilliant professionals in regulatory affairs.
  • With my curiosity and my will to always learn more and more about different issues helps me to gain a lot of international experience in a world-leading company..
  • I am enjoying tackling new challenges and learning a new role in the organisation.
  • This opportunity to try something different is one of the key strengths of the Novo Nordisk Graduate Programme.
  • I always run after my goals and I want to work in an international and culturally-diverse organisation with all the opportunities that Novo Nordisk can to provide me.
  • It is one of the best international pharmaceutical company and I would like to have the opportunity to use my recently-acquired master’s degree to make a difference to patients and begin my career in an ambitious global pharmaceutical company like this, leader in diabetes care.
  • With this application letter I intend to show my ability to adapt to different environments and working areas.
  • I consider myself a dynamic, organised, adaptable and hardworking person with a critical spirit and sense of responsibility.
  • You will find me as a person accepting challenges and solving them with confidence.
  • I am highly motivated to work in regulatory area and I believe that the expertise I developed during my master will be an asset in this field.
  • Based on my knowledge, experience, background and achievements, I believe I am the right candidate for this outstanding programme.
  • Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.
  • Should you have any questions or additional information, please fell free to contact me.
  • Yours sincerely, Joana Mendes

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    • My name is Joana Mafalda Ferreira Mendes, I completed my masters degree in Pharmaceutical Sciences in November 2014, at Faculty of Pharmacy at the University of Porto (FFUP), the best pharmacy school in Portugal, and now I am intending to apply for the graduate programme in Regulatory Affairs in Novo Nordisk.
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    • As a student with a masters in Pharmaceutical Sciences, I had the opportunity to gain a solid advanced formation in specific areas of health sciences and technology.
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    • This project promoted my involvement and interest in research activities and I joined the ERASMUS programme where I continued the development work of research in an internship at the Institute for Natural Products Research at UFRJ, in Brazil.
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    • During the time that I lived in Brazil, I discovered that I have a passion for learning about other places and different cultures.
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    • Outside of my comfortable zone, this experience has made me more independent, mature and open to the possibility of becoming a pharmacist in another country.
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    • Today, I am sure this is my first choice and this is one of the main reasons that influenced me to join this programme.
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    • Despite of completed course of the master degree, I never negleted other opportunities that this educational institution could offer me.
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    • So, I was member of the Council of Representatives, like student representative, member of Students’ Association of FFUP, of Junior Association for Entrepreneurship and Innovation and Mobility group of FFUP.
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    • My passage by different student groups allowed me to work on many different projects in numerous departments realizing multiple tasks and developing different interpersonal, relationship and communication skills and I learned to work in team, where I was coordinated by others but and I coordinated too, and get along with people from different cultures, skills, perspectives and experience.
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    • I developed an interest in regulatory affairs in that I came from a research group where anyone became more and more focused in research and I realized my interests lay more in a broader, bigger picture than a narrow picture on a project.
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    • That's what first drew me to look around for other jobs and really attracted me to regulatory and I found a way to make a difference in patients’ lives participating in shepherding medical products from inception to market.
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    • I think the opportunity to work at the interface between business and government regulations that a position in regulatory affairs can offered me is the best for me.
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    • Despite of my lack regulatory affairs experience, I know that some of my characteristics can help me to become a good professional in this area, such as, to be very communicative, well organized, multi-task and love team and paperwork, and the approaching with different health authorities in different countries it will be very positive to my career.
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    • The rotation of this programme encouraged me to apply because I know that I can learn many of new areas with brilliant professionals in regulatory affairs.
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    • With my curiosity and my will to always learn more and more about different issues helps me to gain a lot of international experience in a world-leading company..
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    • I always run after my goals and I want to work in an international and culturally-diverse organisation with all the opportunities that Novo Nordisk can to provide me.
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    • It is one of the best international pharmaceutical company and I would like to have the opportunity to use my recently-acquired master’s degree to make a difference to patients and begin my career in an ambitious global pharmaceutical company like this, leader in diabetes care.
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    • I consider myself a dynamic, organised, adaptable and hardworking person with a critical spirit and sense of responsibility.
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    • I am highly motivated to work in regulatory area and I believe that the expertise I developed during my master will be an asset in this field.
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    • Based on my knowledge, experience, background and achievements, I believe I am the right candidate for this outstanding programme.
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