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    • Travelling alone is no good.

    • When we are going to travel we usually try to gather lots of our friends or relatives.
    • We are convinced that there is nothing better than travelling in company.
    • It is high time to explode this hoary myth!
    • I suppose that not so many people have ever tried to travel alone.
    • Most of us think that it is impossible to travel alone!
    • Meanwhile travelling alone has much more positive sides than travelling with those noisy and annoying friends or what is worse, relatives.
    • Just try to remember how often you complained of them after returning from another spoiled trip.
    • So why don’t you just try to travel alone?
    • It is undeniable, that one of the most enjoyable parts of any journey is sightseeing.
    • When you travel in company it stops being enjoyable, and turns to be a real nightmare.
    • When you travel alone you have lots a greater advantage: you are able to stop and go on, follow this way and that, as the whim takes you!
    • So you can choose those places, what you really want to see and spend as much time on that as you want.
    • No wasted time, no rush.
    • It goes without saying that the main reason why we go travelling is to relax.
    • How is it possible to relax with that constant cackle of voices, giggles and stupid jokes at your elbow?
    • We have enough of that stuff at home, on holiday we need to have a good rest from it.
    • Only travelling alone allows us to enjoy the meditative silence of the morning, picturesque landscapes of the countryside, gorgeous monuments of ancient cities, dramatic sunsets and mysterious night skies full of stars.
    • When we travel alone we can get the entire spectrum of emotions which gives us nature.
    • However, most people feel more than coldly towards travelling alone.
    • We dare say that they have reasons.
    • Travelling alone can be a bit boring: there is no one to share emotions with, no one to take a picture of you… quite soon you start feel lonely without jokes and funny stories.
    • To sum up travelling alone is good for those who really want to enjoy their journey and have a proper rest from their usual mode of life.
    • To my mind, if you go in a company it is no longer a travelling in anything but name.

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    • When we are going to travel we usually try to gather lots of our friends or relatives.
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    • WThen we are going to travel we usually try to gather lots of our best and most enjoyable way to travel,is to go with friends or relatives.
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    • Meanwhile travelling alone has much more positive sides than travelling with those noisy and annoying friends or what is worse, relatives.
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    • MeanwhileActually travelling alone has much morea few positive sidess,rather than travelling with those noisy and annoying friends or what is worseorse still, relatives.
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    • Just try to remember how often you complained of them after returning from another spoiled trip.
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    • Just try to remember how often you complained of themWe remember the complaints made after returning from another spoiled trip.
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    • When you travel alone you have lots a greater advantage: you are able to stop and go on, follow this way and that, as the whim takes you!
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    • When you travel alone you have lots a greater advantage: you are ablfreedom to choose where to stop ,and go on, follow this way and that, where to go,as the whim takes you!
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    • So you can choose those places, what you really want to see and spend as much time on that as you want.
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    • So you canYou have freedom to choose those places, what you really want to see and to spend as much time on thatthere as you want.
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    • How is it possible to relax with that constant cackle of voices, giggles and stupid jokes at your elbow?
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    • How is it It can be impossible to relax with thatall the constant cackle of voices, giggles and stupid jokes at your elbow?.
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    • We have enough of that stuff at home, on holiday we need to have a good rest from it.
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    • We hleave enough of that stuff at home, on holiday we needhome to get away from it,holidays are there to have a good rest from it.and relaxation
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    • Only travelling alone allows us to enjoy the meditative silence of the morning, picturesque landscapes of the countryside, gorgeous monuments of ancient cities, dramatic sunsets and mysterious night skies full of stars.
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    • Only t Travelling alone allows us to enjoy the meditative silence of the morningdays, picturesque landscapes of the countryside, gorgeous monuments of ancient cities, dramatic sunsets and mysterious night skies full of stars.
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    • Travelling alone can be a bit boring: there is no one to share emotions with, no one to take a picture of you… quite soon you start feel lonely without jokes and funny stories.
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    • Travelling alone can be a bit boring: has its downside,there is no one to share emotions with, no one to take a picture of you… quite soonwithout a good book to read, you start feel lonely without jokes and funny stories.
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    • To sum up travelling alone is good for those who really want to enjoy their journey and have a proper rest from their usual mode of life.
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    • To sum up travelling alone is good for a must for those who like to get out of their comfort zone,those who areally adventurous,and want to enjoy their journey and have a proper rest,a good break from their usual mode of life.
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