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Hi !
I'm Eve from France.
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come in France !
:) Please contact me if you're interested!

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- Hi !
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句子 2
- I'm Eve from France.
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句子 3
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come in France !
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- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come into France !
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- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english ~~and why not go~~. Maybe one day I will visit you at your home ~~and~~or you ~~will co~~may come visit me in France !
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- :) Please contact me if you're interested!
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