Corrections

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Uncorrected

Text from Eve66 - English

Original Version
Corrected Version

correspondant english
Hi !
I'm Eve from France.
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come in France !
:) Please contact me if you're interested!

Eve66February 2013Vote now!
- Report as spam?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Title
- correspondant english
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Title
Sentence 1
- Hi !
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I'm Eve from France.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come in France !
  Vote now!
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english and why not go at your home and you will come into France !
  pero98 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I'm 14 and I'd like to meet an english correspondent to improve my english ~~and why not go~~. Maybe one day I will visit you at your home ~~and~~or you ~~will co~~may come visit me in France !
  Acasualdream Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
Sentence 4
- :) Please contact me if you're interested!
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4