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Hey everybody !
My name is Nathanael and I'm 17.
- I'm from France since I was born.
- My hobbies are the Music, singing and the sport.
- My most butiful dream is to became an artist.

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câu 1
- My name is Nathanael and I'm 17.
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câu 2
- I'm from France since I was born.
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- I'm from France where I have lived since I was born.
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câu 3
- My hobbies are the Music, singing and the sport.
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- My most butiful dream is to became an artist.
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- My most beautiful dream is to becaome an artist.
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