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  • Pros and Cons of Office sharing

    • Some people say that there is no future for office sharing.
  • Other people disagree.
  • I will write about pros and cons of office sharing and express my own opinion.
  • The advantages of shared working places, is that you could have conversations with your colleagues.
    • That is especially really helpful if workers having troubles in different duties.
    • Shared offices spaces helps people to motivate each other and this positively affect your work.
    • Additionally, in a shared office you would have a better time management because nothing and nobody could interrupt you.
  • Moreover, you have more flexibility in creating you own work.
    • Otherwise the disadvantages are that workers may be have to pay for the work space and you have to share and may be book a conference room for every meeting in advance.
    • Furthermore, It could be that other colleagues distracts you, while they make for example loud telephone calls the whole day.
  • In my opinion, it is much more effective if you work in a office with other people because you can help each other.
    • And if you may be have lack of motivation the colleagues could motivate you than as a follow people works more productive.

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    • Additionally, in a shared office you would have a better time management because nothing and nobody could interrupt you.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Additionally, in a shared office you would have a better time management skills because nothing and nobody could interrupt you.
      jamiemasonjamiemason profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Otherwise the disadvantages are that workers may be have to pay for the work space and you have to share and may be book a conference room for every meeting in advance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Otherwise the disadvantages are that workers may be have to pay for their work space and you have to share and may besometimes even booking a conference room for every meetings in advance.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Furthermore, It could be that other colleagues distracts you, while they make for example loud telephone calls the whole day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Furthermore, It could be that the other colleagues distracts you, while they make for example loud telephone calls the whole day.; they might answer the telephone in a loud voice for example.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • In my opinion, it is much more effective if you work in a office with other people because you can help each other.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • And if you may be have lack of motivation the colleagues could motivate you than as a follow people works more productive.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And if you may be havare maybe lack ofing motivation the, your colleagues could motivate you than as a follow people workswhich helps other people and the whole workspace to be more productive.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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